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Co-authored-by: Jessica <[email protected]>

Author: bene2k1

pages/elastic-metal/troubleshooting/index.mdx

@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@ categories:
 <ProductHeader
   productName="Elastic Metal troubleshooting"
   productLogo="elasticMetal"
-  description="Learn how to fix common issues with Scaleway Elastic Metal servers. Find solutions to help resolve problems and get started."
+  description="Learn how to fix common issues with Scaleway Elastic Metal servers."
 />
 
 ## Featured Pages
@@ -27,33 +27,33 @@ categories:
     />
     <DefaultCard
       title="Elastic Metal server datasheet"
-      description="This datasheet provides an overview of the technical specifications for the different Elastic Metal server offers."
+      description="Get an overview of the technical specifications for the different Elastic Metal servers."
       url="/elastic-metal/reference-content/elastic-metal-datasheet/"
       label="See more"
     />
     <DefaultCard
       title="Troubleshooting common Elastic Metal server access issues"
-      description="This page provides guidelines how to troubleshoot the most common server access issues."
+      description="Learn how to solve the most common server access errors."
       url="/elastic-metal/troubleshooting/troubleshoot-access-issues/"
       label="See more"
     />
 </Grid>
 <Grid>
     <DefaultCard
-      title="Enabling SSH on Elastic Metal servers running virtualization distributions"
-      description="This guide explains how to enable the SSH server on Virtualization distributions"
+      title="Enabling SSH on Elastic Metal servers"
+      description="Learn to enable an SSH server on virtualization distributions."
       url="/elastic-metal/troubleshooting/enable-ssh-virtualization-distribution/"
       label="See more"
     />
     <DefaultCard
       title="Replacing a failed drive in a RAID1 software RAID"
-      description="This guide explains how to replace a failed drive and rebuild the RAID1 array using the mdadm utility."
+      description="Replace a failed drive and rebuild the RAID1 array using the mdadm utility."
       url="/elastic-metal/troubleshooting/replace-failed-drive-software-raid/"
       label="See more"
     />
     <DefaultCard
-      title="Elastic Metal"
-      description="Our shared responsibility model clarifies the division of duties between Scaleway and our users."
+      title="Elastic Metal shared responsibility"
+      description="Understand the division of duties between Scaleway and our users."
       url="/elastic-metal/reference-content/shared-responsibility-model/"
       label="See more"
     />